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I think I've mentioned it before, but it is worth mentioning again that my preferred style of writing is multi-POV (point of view). While I don't get as hardcore as George R. R. Martin, in my series Urban Legend, I've got three distinct POVs going. Each subsequent installment will have three POVs, but switching out a few so by the end of Rylee's first school year at Artemis Academy there will have been six POV characters with varied levels of alliance and antagonism (not mutually exclusive in at least a couple cases). Writing each POV character requires me to fully flesh out those characters as I would any protagonist. While not all writing styles match mine, I think it is very important for writers to consider minor characters as assets and not afterthoughts.

From Uni-dimensional...
During my brief but not insignificant foray into screenwriting, I was taught to think about the major characters as "round" characters and minor characters as "flat" characters. The reason being, in screenplays there is limited real estate on the page so the focus needs to be the characters that matter. In the years since developing my writing, I can say with absolutely conviction that this unequivocally false; every character needs to be as "round" as the next. Viewers and readers have become more sophisticated in recent decades and uni-dimensional characters aren't going to cut it. The talking heads, linear love-interests, and the sycophant sidekicks now spark irritation and outrage as demand for realism is at an all time high. Dragons and cyborgs are fine, but the princess better be more than a "basic DiD" (Damsel in Distress). Even if the reader never actually sees the full complexity of a character, like the tavern owner in two pages with six lines of dialogue, they need to feel as if he was a real person, otherwise the whole sequence will be indeed "flat."

The “Plot-point” Character
One of the most pointless characters is the one who serves a single plot driving purpose and then becomes irrelevant. This is the "talking heads" whose sole purpose to to drive the Exposition Express right down the readers gullet, full steam ahead. Or the deus ex machina character who was maybe hanging around like loose garbage than at the end helps save the day in some small way. And of course there is the comic relief: the funny person who, at best, offers a few quips; or at worse, hinders the protagonist in contrived comedy to pad the conflict (nobody likes that guy). These kinds of characters pop up in all genres, and if poorly done enough can throw the reader out of the story with caricatures and not characters. A litmus test to see if such a character plays such a role, pluck them out entirely and see how intact the story remains. If the plot only needs a few minor plot holes to fill, you might want to consider dropping them OR perhaps spend some time around upping their significance by making them multi-dimensional.

The “Character-point” Character
These serve a bit more useful purpose, if nonetheless still limited in function. Character point characters tend to evoke or amplify certain emotions or traits in the protagonist to help them on their way. The love interest might only be there to be pretty and co-dependent (both guys and gals) and ultimately serve no ground-breaking plot-purpose. Or they could be that teacher who shows them the "Ways of the Whatever" and then either hangs around or drifts away because they got nothing else to do. Or, it could be that lovable scamp who ends up dying and drives the protagonist to go Super Saiyan or something and drives home the finale (or the next installment). While these roles have a bit more depth, they are still merely roles, a box the minor character is packaged in and shipped off. Instead of dropping these characters though, they sill have the framework to be potentially integral characters. To lift themselves off the page as a simple "LOL" to a "BFF".

... to Multi-dimensional
While minor characters don't have to be explicitly as robust as the protagonists and antagonists, they do need a sense of realism about them. I start with this question: Who are they without the protagonist? This then trickles over into how the antagonist is their own protagonist, but these musing don't necessarily make it to the page in whole. The reader might know that the love interest has had a string of failed romances in the past and while he might keep hope alive in his heart, the optimism is gone from his mind. This will subtly change the interactions, will pull at some real tension, as the unseen turmoil within the minor character is only briefly shown. Or perhaps the funny, loyal buddy who takes on the quest is secretly scared to his core. But he puts on the brave front with a sly smile and hopes to not let his pal down. Or perhaps the mentor has an ulterior motive, seeing to gain something else while seeming altruistic to those who don't pry too hard. This single question can breathe new color into an otherwise drab, monochromatic character.

Final Thought
I have one final thought to leave with you: I love building characters. I usually start with the antagonist, which neatly leads into the protagonist's journey. Then I create the surrounding cast that the protagonist will interact with. I let the interactions and needs grow organically and if I find myself slipping from trope to cliche, I take a hard left somewhere just to keep it interesting. Though, every so often, I'll create a minor character that leaps a bit too much off the page, is a bit too unique, and begins to overshadow the protagonist. It's in these moments where I consider, "Am I writing the right story?" Would the minor character be better switched with the protagonist? Or would it serve the story better to have the events take place as is, but shift the focus to the little upstart? There is no easy, or even a specifically correct, answer with this. Though just knowing I've created a character with that much rhetorical weight is victory enough. Have you ever done this?

I hope you found some bit of inspiration from this! Next on the agenda is how to Bolster the Character Development and that will conclude the Bolstering Series.

Future Guest Posts:
  • Bolstering Character Development (April 15, 2017)
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The time is here! I can't believe it, but this is the official announcement for my chronic illness anthology! Aren't you excited?!

Thanks to your love and support, I have been able to get all of the details ready way earlier than planned and I am excited to release the submission guidelines for the first book in my anthology series!

About the Anthology:
As I move forward in my chronic illness journey, it has become abundantly clear just how little reading material is out there for teens and young adults struggling with mental and/or physical illnesses. More specifically, I've found very little material dedicated to chronic illness warriors like myself.

Occasionally, I'll come across a great depiction of what it's like to live with an illness in a fiction book, but that's not what I'm looking for. Had there been a helpful book when I first started this journey, I believe that I would have learned how to accept my new life and cope with the new changes that my body would undergo earlier on in the process.

Since that wasn't the case, I've decided to team up with a myriad of writers and create something new! My goal is to help those struggling with similar problems and conditions, while also working towards ending the stigma against both mental and physical illnesses!

What I'm Looking for:
Ultimately, I am hoping to create a collection of letters from you to your younger self. This can be for a specific age, prior to your diagnosis, or in the early stages of your treatment plans. It's completely up to you!

In these letters, I would like to include a bit of helpful advice as well as inspiration. I don't only want to help educate others, but I want to inspire them too! So consider including how your life has changed since your diagnosis in a positive manner, how you stay positive despite your illness, or maybe even include ways to show yourself self-love. Don't force it though, we want your open and honest letters!

If you're interested in submitting a letter like this, we'd love to hear from you! Just take a moment to read through the guidelines below and shoot us an email at ivycirillobooks@gmail.com !

Submission Guidelines:
  • All forms of contact and submissions must be in English.
  • All letters should be submitted as Microsoft Word documents.
  • All documents should use the following specifics: 12 point text, Times New Roman font, single spaced lines, and one inch margins. 
  • In addition, please make sure that there is only one space after punctuation and one line in between paragraphs.
  • In the upper right hand corner of the first page, please make sure to include the letter's final word count as well as your contact information (i.e. name, address, phone number, email).
  • Letters should not exceed three pages in length.
  • In the same document, please include a brief introduction of yourself and how you think your letter connects with the theme.
  • Lastly, please include a brief author biography, less than six lines, as well as any publishing credits that you may have. And of course, feel free to include any and all links to your website or social media accounts, with the most important one marked with a star. 
  • Deadline: All submissions must be turned in to ivycirillobooks@gmail.com by June 5, 2017. 
Responses:
Currently, we are scheduled to have all responses back to individual contributors by June 15, 2017. However, please note that we will respond as quickly as we can to each submission! We would like to publish as soon as possible, so there is a chance that our announcement date will be moved forward!

In the chance that we do not select your letter for this volume, please do not be discouraged. We plan to publish multiple volumes in a wide variety of additional topics. If we think that your submission would be a good fit for a different project, we will notify you immediately!

In addition, we appreciate your patience greatly! Since there is no reading fee, we encourage you to use this time to follow us on our various social media pages and interact with us as well as our existing followers! Doing so does not guarantee your piece will be published, but it will surely get you noticed :)

Edits:
Although we do request that all submissions are polished to the best of your abilities prior to being submitted, we do understand that there are bound to be a few errors along the way. With that being said, we do plan to request editing suggestions from each author as well as additional beta and proofreaders. Additionally, each author will get a say in possible edits to their piece. Our ultimate goal is to create a cohesive book that fits together like a perfectly cut puzzle! Contributors are the heart and soul of this anthology, so we want to make sure that you feel respected and involved in the entire process!

Compensation:
Since the main mission of this anthology is to educate, inspire, and work towards ending the stigma against both mental and physical illnesses, we cannot ensure a large compensation package at this time. While we would love to pay each author individually, it's important to note that this is the first book of this series and we don't currently have a budget set up; and since we are planning to donate a percentage of royalties to a deserving cause, we are trying to keep our costs to a minimum. With that being said, please rest assured knowing that you will benefit from this publication!

Overtime, additional benefits may be added, but below you will find the current compensation package:
  • Each author will receive two personal copies of the publication: one paperback and one e-book.
  • Each author will receive a maximum of five e-book copies to give away in preparation for the book release or during the virtual book launch party.
  • Each author will help support a deserving cause, because 15% of all royalties will be donated to charity. 
  • Each author will have their author bio published in the back of the anthology, including one personal link.
  • Each author will have the chance to share their story and impact the community around them.
  • Each author will be able to add this publication to their current list of titles. This will help new authors make a name for themselves and previously published authors can keep the momentum moving in between publications. 
  • Each author will have the chance to meet other authors and form long lasting connections.
  • Each author will be extended the offer for additional exposure and collaboration opportunities on Ivy Cirillo Books and Perfectly Ambitious. 
  • Each author will benefit from the cross promotion between each contributors readership.
  • Each author will be able to participate in virtual book tours and other marketing events.
  • Each author will have the opportunity to order paperback copies in bulk at a discounted price for their website or author events.
Rights & Legal Information:
Although we will send a contract to each author upon acceptance, we have included a short list of important details. 
  • Each author must retain the rights to any and all materials submitted for consideration. It is imperative that authors do not violate any contract or copyright laws.
  • All authors agree that they will not transmit any materials that contain computer viruses or other harmful components that are intended to damage, detrimentally interfere with, or intercept any system, data, or personal information. In other words, all submissions will be limited to the requested materials and simple text.
  • We will request first English-Language publication rights for any piece accepted for publication in the above anthology. However, we do not require rights to publish any submission as a standalone piece.
  • We will request the continuing, non-exclusive right to reproduce the author’s work as part of the specified anthology only. We only request these rights for reprints and future editions of the anthology.
  • For all work published with us, we will request the right to use contributing authors names, accepted work, and likeness in a fair and dignified manner, in connection with the advertising and promotion of the work. This includes, but is not limited to, social media platforms, blogs, and email lists.
  • After a set period of time following publication, authors will be able to publish their piece again under their own name. If they want to publish their piece in a larger collection of work, we just request that they mention it's initial publication within the above anthology.
  • Authors will always retain copyright ownership over their work.
  • We will only retain the copyrights for the collective work as a whole, and will acknowledge the authors as the copyright owners for their contributed works.
  • Submission to Ivy Cirillo Books constitutes acceptance of all conditions outlined above.
* Please note that we do retain the right to change, update, or add information to this list at any time. *



In case we missed something, or you have additional questions, feel free to contact us today!

If you're interested in this project, but don't want to submit a piece, that's ok too! There are lots of other ways that you can help support this new book!

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Every now and then, I like to take a moment to introduce an author to all of you! With this interview series, I've come to know an amazing group of writers and I want you to know them too! 

For today's installment, I've had the pleasure of interviewing author E. Rachael Hardcastle! According to her website, she's a "dreamer, a deep thinker, a bookworm and grammar nerd."

Of course, I know we all want to know more than that! That's why I've sent her an in-depth questionnaire with 75 of the most intriguing questions I could come up with! And since E. Rachael is an amazing interviewee, she took the time to answer every single one of them! So not only do we get one interview with E. Rachael, but we actually get three!

Let's get started :)

About the Author:

  • Where are you from? I'm British, currently living in West Yorkshire.
  • Are you a full-time writer? If not, what else do you do? I write in my free time, work full-time in an office and also visit schools when required.
  • If you couldn’t be an author, what would your ideal career be? Why? It would be fun to work as an editor or for a publishing house.
  • What’s your favorite genre to read? I'm a fan of fantasy, dystonia and post-apocalyptic fiction, but I will read anything that looks and sounds interesting.
  • What’s your favorite book? The Time Keeper by Mitch Albom.

About Being an Author:
  • When did you know that you wanted to be an author? I don't think there's a specific moment, but I started writing at 14 years old after having a poem published in school.
  • Were you ever discouraged about pursing your passion? If so, how’d you push past it? No, I have never been discouraged. I have sometimes felt like giving up when sales were low or I got writer's block, but my friends and family have always supported me.
  • Does your family support your writing career? Yes and they always have.
  • Did you ever consider writing under a pseudonym? If I wrote non-fiction I would choose another name, but only to separate the two.
  • Is writing your passion or your hobby? Both.
  • What has been your best experience so far as an author? Being on television with the children from Low Ash Primary School.

About Your Book:
  • What gave you the ideas for your most recent work? I have several books ongoing, so I can't give you a specific title. I also don't think anything in particular sparks my ideas, they just accumulate and build into something I think is worthy of a story.
  • What inspired your novel’s cover? Finding Pandora: Book One: World is a young woman with hair draped across her face, laying in a forest. The book is set in a forest and I liked the image because it shows Arriette's imperfections.
  • What was the hardest part of finishing your novel? Editing. I hate editing, but it's necessary.

About Your Writing:
  • What’s your favorite genre to write? Fantasy and post-apocalyptic fiction.
  • What’s one genre that you secretly want to write? Horror.
  • Where do you get your big ideas? I soak them in from everywhere, then I fit them together like a jigsaw puzzle until I can shape a basic outline. The media and other stories on television or in books can be very inspirational.
  • Did any of your books stem from dreams? No but I sometimes dream about my characters.
  • How do you come up with the names for your characters? They come up with their own names and they tend to just come to me. I think a character's name has to suit them, but I do tend to look up the meanings of names. For example, in Finding Pandora I used the name Coyote, which means trickster.
  • Who’s your favorite character you’ve created so far? Why? Arriette Monroe. She is one of my oldest characters and I have spent the most time on her stories.

About the Process:
  • What is your writing process like? I usually get the idea, do a basic outline, do a first draft, then go back several times and edit until I'm sick of seeing the book! 
  • Is there any part of the process you wish you could delegate to someone else? Editing, but I'm a real control freak and although I hate how long editing takes, I think it's important for me to know how to do it.
  • What’s your favorite part of the writing process? The idea generation and the initial draft. It's fun and creative.
  • Are you a planner or a pantser? I used to be a pantser but more recently due to re-writing some of my young adult books, I have become a planner.
  • Writers block, how do you cope with it? I tell myself it doesn't exist and that I just need extra motivation. I think when authors no longer feel excited about an idea, they call that lull writers block. I don't force words if I'm really not feeling the story, but I will then go and work on something else until I feel better or think of something that might improve the story.
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I am a published author. Both traditionally and, more recently, self-published. When I was traditionally published I got to work on the written word and let others worry about what the packaging would look like. As a self-published author, I don’t quite have that same luxury. All the responsibility for all aspects of the book fall onto me.

I do, however, have a bit of an advantage. In my “day job” I’m also a graphic designer. That allows me to understand what goes into a cover design and how to lay it out most effectively.

Lately I’ve been doing some thinking, and I want to share an approach that might help the writerly folk out there breach the wall between words and pictures.

Let’s start with your book. It most likely started with a spark. A basic premise that took you down the rabbit hole of creativity. From there you developed the plot. Putting together the events and situations that made up the story you wanted to tell. Roughly at that same time you developed the characters. The people that would convey the story. The focus of the novel that told the tale. At that point began the actual act of writing. You executed the story to the best of your ability, putting together everything that you had thought up into one coherent book. Finally, came the editing. Either yourself, or more likely, another person came in and went through the text to help refine the work into a polished piece ready for presentation.

A book cover works exactly the same way.

You have to start your cover with a premise. An idea of what will represent the book. It doesn’t matter if it’s a detailed illustration, a highly graphic color-blocking technique, or even just bold text, you have an idea. This is your foundation for the cover. Now you have to tell a story with that cover. You have to come up with a plot. What is it that will convey the story to your readers at a glance? How will you draw them in with a single image?

So, who is going to convey that story? What one character is going to tell it to the reader? Don’t limit your thinking about what that means, either. This can be a person, an object, a setting, or even colors and letters. This is your character. The one thing that is going to tell the story on the page.

And don’t think that idea is beyond you. You just wrote an entire novel. You described scene after scene throughout the course of the book. This is just one more scene. Which is where your execution comes into play. Write the cover out. Describe it, and remember that it is more important than ever here to show and not tell. You don’t want a paragraph on your cover to tell the reader what is happening, you want to let them see it themselves. (Unless, of course, you are writing a genre where a cover blurb is appropriate. There are no absolute laws here.)

Lastly comes editing. If you have the means, you can finish this off yourself. More likely, however, you will need to bring in an outside talent to help polish off the cover and make it what you want. This can be an illustrator, a photographer, or just a graphic designer to put the elements together into a press-ready file.

So, when you’re thinking about the cover for your book, don’t think of it as a separate piece. It has the exact same qualities and concepts behind it that you’ve already put together. Premise. Plot. Character. Execution. Editing.

Don’t push this aside as an add-on to your novel. You’re creative. Take that ability and put the same thought into the creation of your cover. Make it yours, because, ultimately, this is your story.

And if you are the type that wants to get in there and do the physical construction, stick with me. I’m creating a follow-up post to this one that explores the technical side of things and hopefully gives you some pointers on how to do actual layout, both inside and out.

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It took a little while to get back on track, but I'm excited to announce that the Weekly Writing & Reading Recaps are back on!

Monday
So far I'd say today is off to a good start! I've already managed to schedule two blog posts and now I'm going to get a little reading time in :) Next up, I worked on my new story binders and even got a little bit of writing in! And of course, I finished the day off with some reading too!

Page Count: 76
Word Count: 456

Tuesday:
Well guys, today was exhausting! It's only 10 o'clock and I can't stop yawning :/ Honestly, I'm probably gonna head to bed soon, but I have to admit it's been a pretty productive day! I went to the chiropractor, the dentist, office depot, ross, and the mall! Then I came home, organized my story binders, and finished the book I've been reading! A little art of me was tempted to start another one tonight, but realistically, I probably wouldn't remember any of it in the morning. Plus, I still have four book reviews to write!

Page Count: 114
Word Count: 0

Wednesday
After yesterday, it took me a little bit to recover this morning, but it's nothing that a couple episodes of Charmed couldn't fix. Then of course, it was lunch time so I postponed work for a tiny bit longer, but after that, I was ready to work! I have to admit, it started out rough. I rewrote the same scene four or five times before making any real progress, but I did end up with over 900 new words for my debut novel! Then I decided to take a break and read until dinner. More than likely, I'll stick with that pattern for the rest of the day :)

Page Count: 309
Word Count: 1668

Thursday
Well guys, today wasn't as productive as I was hoping that it would be, but it was still pretty great! I spent a TON of time working on my upcoming anthology and I'm getting a bunch of details sorted out. I even played around with Photoshop for a while designing a possible cover :) Of course, that didn't leave too much time for writing, so I plan to spend the rest of the night reading!

Page Count: 94
Word Count: 0

Friday
How is it Friday already?! I feel like I just got here and now my writing retreat is almost over! Will someone please share with me how to stop/rewind time?! It would be much appreciated! Well, now that I've exhausted that opportunity, I better get to work! So far today, I've spent a decent amount of time reading, trying to keep my eye from twitching, and looking into possible anthology submissions!  I know I should be working on my current novels, but I can't help that feeling of wanting to be published as soon as possible and a short story could get me there! Or at least I hope it can :)

Page Count: 166
Word Count: 399

Saturday
Today started out with a little bit of self care! I followed my usual morning social media routine, but then I took the extra time to watch one of my favorite creators and Instagrammers on the live feed. We chatted about depression and how to overcome it as well as various other topics. Once the live stream ended, I immediately got to work! I polished off a couple of blog posts, both for this website as well as Perfectly Ambitious, and then I took a lunch break :) After that, I spent some time reading and working on a couple up my upcoming anthology submissions! Overall, I'd say it was a pretty successful day!

Page Count: 121
Word Count: 1,468

Sunday
After an amazing vacation dedicated to reading and writing, it was nice to take the day off. Tomorrow I'll get back to the craziness that is my life, but for today, I actually got to relax! I cleared out of the Airbnb, got a pedicure, went out to lunch, and spent the rest of the day watching Charmed. Overall, I'd say that it was a pretty great end to the week! Of course, I would have liked to avoid the headache, but it wasn't anything I couldn't handle!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Weekly Wrap-up 
This week was probably one of the most productive weeks I've had yet! I managed to finish reading three books and I worked on various writing projects! Honestly, I wish I could have weeks like this all the time, but I'm thankful for the one that I was able to have and I've got my fingers crossed for any future adventures too! I can't wait to see what next week has in store for me :)

Page Count: 880
Word Count: 3,991

Books Read: All the Bright Places, The Day Before, Doll House.
Debut Novel Progress: 81 pages in
Second Novel Progress: 49 pages in
Third Novel Progress: 20 pages in
Anthology Progress: 4 pages in


What have you accomplished this week? Tell me in the comments!

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While having a strong protagonist is the start of a good story, a powerful antagonist leads to the end of a great story. The hero or heroes can only be as effective as the villain they fight against; if the antagonist is lukewarm, a one-and-done sort of enemy, then it didn’t take much to defeat and the heroes didn’t stress their limits. Boring.

But a hero that comes across a seemingly indomitable force, faces insurmountable odds, and clashes with strength and power previously unknown, well that would be one hell of a read.

As of this writing, I don’t have a set up for the overall villain for Urban Legend. Darius is the antagonist, but he’s just a tip of the iceberg. There is a whole chain of command within the Vampirum, and they aren’t the only enemies out there.

Heroes and Villains are separated with only the thinnest of lines. Some are vague and disappear entirely. Let’s explore what those similar differences might be.

Hero in Their Own Mind
A “villain” rarely ever sees themselves as the bad guy in a situation. Normally they claim to be the victim, therefore justified in their actions. They think of themselves as working for the greater good so horrendous actions justify an overall positive result. Or maybe they don’t even really think about it, setting aside ethics and morals to justify the logic of their actions. And maybe, just maybe, the antagonist knows exactly what’s going on, and doesn’t need any justification.

That’s where the antagonist’s head is at, the justification. Everyone knows the difference between right and wrong, and everyone’s got a reason why something at the “wrong” end of the spectrum is okay given the right circumstances. Most of them are harmless and inconsequential, like eating that bit of cake when on a diet because it’s been a hard week. When running pyramid schemes to bilk people out of their hard-earned cash or hacking an ex’s computer to spy on them, that’s when it gets a bit unacceptable.

The following three sections outline potentially the most complex and engaging villain archetypes, each more nefarious than the last.

Fallen Angel
The most tragic expression is arguably “what might have been.” Wasted potential or opportunity, we’ve all been there in one way or another. And how much more tragic is it when a good man goes bad?

Let’s consider the baddie to end all baddies: Lucifer. He was once God’s right hand man, His Riker, his Hamilton, the best and first among angels. Then Lucifer decided that wasn’t enough, he wanted to call the shots, God disagreed, one thing led to another, and Lucifer with a third of the angels fell were cast out of heaven. It’s heartbreaking in that context, in a way.

Think of a character that you would NEVER in a million years consider corruptible or selfish enough to fall into evil. Imagine if Captain America went not rogue, but straight up evil. Or maybe Harry Potter, throwing in with the Dark Lord. Not all at once, because that’s not how it starts: First it’s a little bit of pride, then a little bit of self-righteousness, then a little rebellion. Then at last, there is that point of no return, that line in the sand, and they cross it. They are committed, no regrets, no wavering of their position, all their justifications are lined up and they are set to take action.

While tragic, these are perhaps the most destructive. Their path is borne of conflict and possibly they see themselves as the tragic hero, fighting against the establishment that has fallen. While pity for this kind of antagonist is expected, mercy is not an option. They will use whatever tools they can to survive, including preying on the sympathies of others.

Do not bargain with a Fallen Angel. Shoot on sight; Shoot to kill.

Anti-Villain
Who doesn’t love and anti-hero? That roguish scoundrel who plays outsides the rules of convention, but still has a heart of gold. Robin Hood is such a figure, fighting a corrupt false king and willing to live in the outskirts of society with his merry men if it means he can rob the rich and give to the poor.

Now let’s reverse that: Instead of a hero operating a bit like a villain, how about a villain who operates like a hero?

Imagine a mob boss, running the crime of a major metropolis. He runs guns, drugs, hookers, is ruthless with those whom cross him, and has major government and law enforcement officials on payroll. Scary right? It gets worse:

He defends the children; anyone caught abusing kids in any way just disappears. He doesn’t run a sex slave ring, prostitutes are well cared for with health benefits (one of his brothels even fronts as a fitness center). He doesn’t like collateral damage, he finds it a waste and unprofessional. Anyone can run any scam they want, as long as they register with him and it doesn’t conflict with his existing policies. Hell, he might even have a legit retirement plan for his people, the white-picket-fence kind not the cement-overcoat kind. This kind of antagonist would be really complex to get at.

John Marcone, a character from Jim Butcher’s Dresden Files, is such an antagonist. Ruthless and merciful, he is the best example of this kind of villain, the “civilized criminal”. How would a hero depose him without collapsing the whole thing and bring down chaos? The antagonist could even work more with the law than the protagonist might. And since the antagonist would fight to protect their interests, there could come a time the hero and the villain must team up to fight an even eviler evil.

The Anti-Villain is arguable the most insidious: bulletproof without even needing any kevlar. Proceed with caution.

The Greatest of These…
What is the most powerful emotion, the one that most changes the world? Hate and anger might lead to momentary action and conviction, but it is love that sustains a revolution. Love is what unifies us as a species, what lets us thrive, what drives us to explore our world and reach out to ones beyond it. It forges civilizations, builds communities, and binds together family. It is an extraordinary power and it's horrifying when it becomes a weapon.

Imagine someone grieves for the fate of a loved one, but that grief turns rancid and compels that person to do unspeakable deeds. Maybe the person loves from afar, but it wasn’t meant to be, so that twists into an obsession and that leads them down a dark path. Perhaps it isn’t even a person, but an idea like freedom, where they become so hyper-focused on that one specific outcome that they are blind to all the chaos that rains around them.

There is a quite a bit of overlap with this type of antagonist, the Fallen Angel, and Anti-Villain; they aren’t even mutually exclusive. But the main difference here is that the Antagonist is motivated by love. From that love there is purpose, and from that purpose comes that resolve. An antagonist who loves will be the last to break, the first to rise again, and is the absolute hardest to end.

When dealing with an antagonist who loves, be prepared to sacrifice all to defeat.

Final Legacy
Many more antagonist types float around than those mentioned above. The flavors of antagonism are a buffet, each can be tailored to the protagonist and readers taste (or distaste). But two things must remain true for an antagonist: the first is that they are the hero in their own story, and second, their legacy rings out beyond that story.

No hero or villain seeks to cast a modest shadow, they work to change the world as they think it should be. Just as the legends of heroes are remembered, so are the villains.

This element is the least identifiable: what makes a person, hero or otherwise, ring out beyond the pages and develop a mythos of their own? Fear is a good place to start, the fear so great they can’t even say the name aloud. Or perhaps the antagonist was a devastatingly brilliant tactician and was brought down only after hope was lost and at a ruinous price. Maybe the antagonist had a power that transcended the laws of physics, possibly he could simply speak and others would do his will without question. And it could be the antagonist believed so much, so fiercely, that the peoples of the worlds he lit afire felt compassion and loved him, even as they threw his body to the flames he had wrought.

I hope you found an applicable idea or two from this! Antagonists are people too, with their flaws and virtues, though the flaws tend to stand out a bit in comparison. Next time, I’ll tackle how to Bolster the Minor Characters to expand the story cast and give it a richer texture.

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As some of you guys already know, I'm currently working on a couple verse novels. So, I've been reading a ton of books from authors familiar with writing in verse. Mainly, Ellen Hopkins and Lisa Schroeder.

Before starting my project, I hadn't heard of Lisa Schroeder's work before; however, after doing my research, it soon became clear that she was definitely an author that I needed to check out! So, what did I do? I made my way over to Amazon and ordered four of her verse novels: I Heart You, You Haunt Me, Far From You, Chasing Brooklyn, and The Day Before!

Synopsis:
Restless souls and empty hearts

Brooklyn can't sleep. Her boyfriend, Lucca, died only a year ago, and now her friend Gabe has just died of an overdose. Every time she closes her eyes, Gabe's ghost is there waiting for her. She has no idea what he wants or why it isn't Lucca visiting her dreams.

Nico can't stop. He's always running, trying to escape the pain of losing his brother, Lucca. But when Lucca's ghost begins leaving messages, telling Nico to help Brooklyn, emotions come crashing to the surface.

As the nightmares escalate and the messages become relentless, Nico reaches out to Brooklyn. But neither of them can admit that they're being haunted. Until they learn to let each other in, not one soul will be able to rest.

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It took a little while to get back on track, but I'm excited to announce that the Weekly Writing & Reading Recaps are back on!

Monday
Guys, I'm taking some initiative today! I have been struggling to stay motivated and find the perfect work/life balance and I'm finally doing something about it! You'd be amazed how hard it can be to keep everything afloat here, but I can't wait to take a break from it all! This week, I'll be preparing myself and my blogs for a week away. You heard me, I'm going to take my first solo vacation and I couldn't be more excited!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Tuesday:
You wouldn't know it, but I've been EXTREMELY productive today! Of course, I can't tell you what I was doing though because it's a secret! Honestly, I'm so freaking excited for all of the things that I have to come and I absolutely cannot wait to share them all with you! I just wish my fingers weren't going numb because I'd keep on working to get everything to you faster!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Wednesday
Once again, I've been super productive today! Not only did I get a few things sorted out for a brand new product, but I've done a bunch of other stuff today too! In fact, I managed to schedule four blog posts for this blog and four blog posts for Perfectly Ambitious too! And had a migraine not interrupted, I would have taken a reading break too!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Thursday
Welp, this migraine will not go away! Nevertheless, I am still trying my hardest to get everything done this week! I've already crossed off a few things on my to do list and I'm working towards crossing a few others off before going to bed! I really wanted to get some reading in tonight, but I just couldn't force myself to do it :/ It's already midnight and I've still got work to do. Fingers crossed I don't stay up too late!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Friday
Honestly, it feels like no matter how productive I am, I'm still not getting anything done. I've worked on multiple blog posts today, worked with a freelance client, and entered an Instagram rep search, but my to do list is still a mile long! No matter what though, I still need to cross everything off in order to fully take advantage of next week's writing retreat! So back to work I go!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Saturday
I went to my first author festival today and it completely surpassed all of my expectations! I met so many wonderful authors and I can't wait to tell you all about them! Be on the lookout for new book reviews too because I may have picked up a couple signed books :) Not only that, but I made some amazing connections and I can't wait to see how they grow! And of course, I ran some errands after that and got a couple things ready for my writing retreat! Can you tell I'm excited?!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Sunday
Today's the day! I've successfully finished the first day of my writing retreat and I'm incredibly happy! I spent a majority of the day preparing for the trip, but once I got here, I got everything unpacked, organized, and ready to go! Would you believe me if I told you I read two books too? Because I did! I can't even begin to tell you how excited I am to see how the rest of the week goes!

Page Count: 158
Word Count: 0

Weekly Wrap-up 
Normally, I would probably be disappointed in this week's accomplishments, but I'm not. I wasn't able to focus on reading or writing this week because I was preparing for my reading/writing retreat! Overall, I just know that it was all worth it and my numbers will be crazy awesome in the weeks to come! Who knows, I might even do Camp NaNoWriMo again :)

Page Count: 158
Word Count: 0

Books Read: Open When: Letters to Lift Your Spirits and DROPS OF LIGHT.
Debut Novel Progress: 74 pages in
Second Novel Progress: 49 pages in
Third Novel Progress: 17 pages in
Anthology Progress: 4 pages in


What have you accomplished this week? Tell me in the comments!

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Nowadays, it seems like there's a subscription box for everything! I mean, you can find them for fashion, food, fitness, and so much more! What ever your niche may be, I'm sure they've got one for you!

Unfortunately, it wasn't that easy to find one for myself. After hours of searching, a few one month subscriptions, and month's of disappointment; I came to the realization that I might just not be able to find one for myself.

Of course, once I started following a bunch of bookstagrammers on Instagram, I realized that I'd just been looking in all the wrong places! I was too busy looking at all of the one's that the lifestyle bloggers and youtube vloggers were posting about. I wasn't actually focusing on the things that I already love.

So, incase you're a bookworm like me and you've been looking in all the wrong places, I've gathered up a few of my dream subscription boxes. Take a look!
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As some of you know, I've been using Blogging for Books for almost a year now. I absolutely love reading, so it's nice to get a free book every once in a while :)

Over the course of the last few months, I've had an interesting experience to say the least. I mostly joined because I wanted to get a copy of one of Mindy Kaling's books, but there weren't any available by the time that I signed up.

Nevertheless, I looked around the available books and picked a couple out! Since then, I've reviewed The Little Paris Bookshop, Approval Junkie, and June. The first one I loved, but I can't truly say the same about the others.

I was almost ready to sever the relationship until I saw that Blogging for Books was offering review copies of The Sun Is Also a Star. I had been dying to get my hands on a copy and I'm so glad I did! Since then, I've stuck with the company and I've seen a couple other awesome books hit their website too!

This time around, I requested Girl in Pieces by Kathleen Glasgow. I had seen the book mentioned on a couple of bookstagram accounts and book roundups, so I thought I'd give it a shot! Luckily, my request was approved and they sent me a copy :)

Synopsis:
Charlotte Davis is in pieces. At seventeen she’s already lost more than most people do in a lifetime. But she’s learned how to forget. The broken glass washes away the sorrow until there is nothing but calm. You don’t have to think about your father and the river. Your best friend, who is gone forever. Or your mother, who has nothing left to give you.

Every new scar hardens Charlie’s heart just a little more, yet it still hurts so much. It hurts enough to not care anymore, which is sometimes what has to happen before you can find your way back from the edge. 

A deeply moving portrait of a girl in a world that owes her nothing, and has taken so much, and the journey she undergoes to put herself back together. Kathleen Glasgow's debut is heartbreakingly real and unflinchingly honest. It’s a story you won’t be able to look away from.
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It took a little while to get back on track, but I'm excited to announce that the Weekly Writing & Reading Recaps are back on!

Monday
Today was super productive! Not only did I organize all of my email accounts and respond to all of my emails, but I got a ton of blog posts finished too! You guys have no idea how many incredible guest blog post and author interviews are in the works! And after not reading for a while, I finally forced myself to sit down and get some reading in! If only everything I read and wrote went towards my daily word count :)

Page Count: 37
Word Count: 0

Tuesday:
If you guys could see my to-do list for today, you'd be shocked! Honestly, I don't know how I always have so much to do, but today was no different! Just to give you an idea, heres a quick overview: medication, shower, post office, doctors office, Plato's Closet, Walmart, and packing. Then of course, I came home and responded to a couple of emails while also working on a few freelance gigs! After all was said and done, I put on my pj's and went to bed with my book!

Page Count: 33
Word Count: 0

Wednesday
I have been so freaking productive today! Not only did I work on a bunch of stuff at home, but I got a ton done blogging-wise too! In fact, I wrote/formatted at least 10 blog posts today! So I am absolutely beat! It's still a little early though, so I think I'm going to get some reading time in before bed. Wish me luck!

Page Count: 58
Word Count: 0

Thursday
I don't know what's come over me lately, but I've been hella productive! And yeah, I just said that. Don't judge me. Anyways! Today, I managed to spend two hours on the phone figuring out some insurance/billing issues. Then, I managed to schedule almost all of my Pinterest pins for the month of April! Plus, I found time to post two pictures to Instagram. After that, I started planning something awesome; but it's a secret, so I can't tell you about it just yet! And let's just say, I went a tiny bit overboard so there was no time to read or write today :)

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Friday
I know I've been working all day, but I feel like I didn't get anything accomplished. In reality, I know that I spent every waking moment doing research for a new blog post, but it doesn't feel that way. Rarely, do I end a day having only accomplished one thing. As I'm writing this, it's already midnight and I'm beat. Mentally I feel guilty that I didn't get any reading in, but I know I'll regret it if I don't go to bed right now. Fingers crossed I feel more successful tomorrow!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Saturday
Although I'd like to say I got a ton done today, I can't :/ Instead, all of my time and energy went towards filing my state and federal taxes. And if that wasn't boring enough, we had to sift through receipts, medical bills, and pretty much every file in my office. All just for the IRS to reject our return twice! I'm just hoping tonight is the end of dealing with this!

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Sunday
Guys! Today has been SUPER productive! In preparation for my designated writing time, I've started getting all of my novel stuff organized. Well, today, I made 12 different worksheets for my new novel binders! I can't wait to finish them all and then share them with you in my shop! I'm so excited for this binder bundle to be used by so many amazing authors! Can you tell I'm excited? :)

Page Count: 0
Word Count: 0

Weekly Wrap-up 
As I'm sure you can guess, I'm pretty upset with this weeks results. I was hoping to finish my book this week, but I've just had so much going on! And of course, it doesn't help that I've been taking extensive notes each time I read which is basically cutting my reading time in half. I know that it's only going to help my writing process, but I still can't help but complain. On the plus side though, I got a ridiculous amount of work done on one of my new products! I can't wait to test it out myself and share it with all of you too! Fingers crossed I'll get it done tomorrow :)

Page Count: x
Word Count: 0

Books Read: 128
Debut Novel Progress: 74 pages in
Second Novel Progress: 49 pages in
Third Novel Progress: 17 pages in
Anthology Progress: 4 pages in


What have you accomplished this week? Tell me in the comments!

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Like many of you, I too set New Year's Resolutions for 2017! And of course, one of them was reading related! And if we're friends on Goodreads, then you already know that I've set a goal to read 30 books this year.

Honestly, I struggled to reach my goal last year, so I didn't want to set anything too crazy. I figured that 1 book every 12 days was a reasonable goal and I can't wait to reach it!

So, to keep myself accountable, I've decided to start a monthly reading log! I figured that it would be the easiest way to keep you guys updated while still reminding myself that I need to read! Plus, now you'll be able to read along with me and we can discuss our favorite books along the way :)

February 2017 Reading Log
February Stats
Books Read: 3
Pages Read: 1,170
Average Rating: 3 Stars

February Reads
  • You Will Know Me by Megan Abbott
  • Chasing Brooklyn by Lisa Schroeder
  • Girl in Pieces by Kathleen Glasgow

February Reviews
Ivy Cirillo Books
  • Chasing Polaris
  • You Will Know Me

Perfectly Ambitious
  • Margaux with an X
  • The Girl on the Train

February Reading Challenge Progress
Goodreads
I've read 10/30 books for the year! That means I'm 33% done!

#ICBReadingChallenge2017
So far, I've checked off the following prompts for this year's challenge:
  • A 99¢ e-book from Amazon
  • A book with less than 200 pages
  • A book with multiple authors
  • A book from a genre that you wouldn't normally read
  • A debut novel

Reading Goals
This Month
  • Read six more books
  • Finish two NetGalley books
  • Check off two challenge books
  • Review one book from Blogging for Books

Next Month
  • Read five more books
  • Finish two NetGalley books
  • Check off one challenge books
  • Review one book from Blogging for Books

Overall, I'm kind of disappointed with this month's reading log. I had planned to read six books this month, but I only ended up reading three. I think if February had been a full length month, I would have been able to finish four books. Ultimately, I know I should be happy that I managed to make time for reading, but I think anyone that sets a goal and doesn't make it would be equally as disappointed. Nevertheless, I'm just going to adjust next month's goals a tiny bit and keep on trying!

What did you read this month? Tell me in the comments below!

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